yeah this gets the thumbs up
bit choppy at the start but definately gets better as it goes along. I reckon u should go back and fix that choppiness. Perhaps make the animation sorter too, it kinda went on a little repeating itself. (the girl jumping in the air with a sword). The red eyes were also a little tacky.
Maybe even have some of those cool close up shots that are in anime movies. Those are really cool.
But yes, i liked the skill and effort that you showed. Keep on truckin